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Princess of Barsoom (3rd WIP)

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This is the third revision of my "Princess of Barsoom" HeroMachine cover, with changes based upon the last two. As jrrRichardson pointed out, John Carter should have close-cropped hair and I gave him long hair, orginally. Over on Facebook, someone complained that I'd given him a loin cloth. All he should be wearing is his "harness", for hanging weapons, pouches and the like. So I reworked his outfit. I did, I will admit, follow the lead of just about every illustrator for the ERB stories having it cover his privates. In part, that was to preserve a certain sense of modesty of our Virginian gentleman, as I did with Dejah Thoris's jewelry. In addition, a warrior doesn't particularly want to be unnecessarily vulnerable during combat. John also has acquired a bit more of a tan.

As I said in the first revision, I had been thinking about Edgar Rice Burroughs, and started toying around with his characters using Hero Machine 3. Tarzan led into John Carter, Dejah Thoris, and Tars Tarkas. I went for moderately authentic costuming, so I guess this requires a "Mature Content" label. The green Martian came out a little heftier than I intended, but it was a trade-off against keeping the limbs look proportional, especially his crossed arms. After some review comments, I lengthened the distance between his two sets of arms. I've also changed the shading of Dejah Thoris's skin. ERB described it as a "light reddish copper color", and the first version while "light" seemed rather too pink to be described as "reddish copper". 

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There we go, looks better. Great work, definitely looks more accurate.